Wednesday, March 5, 2014

Minetrapped! Chapter 15: My fate has come


This time BLUE swirls surround me. If I die, good-bye family. I imagine my deathbed and tombstone: Andrew Jackson, died at age 12, assuming that his birthday, July 27th, passed. Died by trying to get out of the computer game Minecraft, when he tried t oget out by using Notch's ( The Minecraft creator.) latest creation, unknown name.  Then I hear a faint POP! 

 I feel carpet. I see my bunk bed. YES! It worked! My brother woke up to my movements. His hair was messed up in all directions. he gasped. Then hugged me. He ran to my parents's bedroom and yelled them out. My mom screamed. Dad and us kids jumped a foot and a half. We celebrated. We stayed at 4'o clock in the morning. It feels good to be home, but Notch... I run to my room and I see Notch with tears. I don't know which kind but he's happy by the way he's jumping around like NUTS! I have a small feeling that I'll see him again.
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  1. AnonymousMarch 5, 2014 at 10:20 AM

    I like The way you put the story under the readers eyes!

    ~Elle

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    1. AnonymousMarch 12, 2014 at 3:49 PM

      Thanks Elle. And right back at you for your After Frozen stories. ( Not the how you put the story in first person, but the story itself.)
      -- Lisa

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  2. AnonymousApril 7, 2014 at 8:49 PM

    Sorry. I forgot to add in an important chapter: Chapter 14... Sorry! I'll pop it up soon... If I can find it. Again, sorry for the inconvenience all the confusion! You might be confused so... I hope the 14th chapter will help... ;) Gosh, it's been a while since I've checked this story... Yikes.
    5/06/14!
    --Lisa

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