Wednesday, March 19, 2014

The Chosen Ones 4

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Martha told me everything I wanted to know."Long ago,a man,conjured a demon.He found a key to the other world,met the Devil and be came a demon,he was going to take over the world,but our master stopped him.But when the red moon comes,and it is full,he will send the chosen one."She turned the conversation."How I long to be the chosen one,now,you are!!!!"She lashed around,"now that your the chosen one...and I want to be the chosen one..."her eyes turned purple."What are you!!??!??!!"I screamed."There is only one way...I...""You what??!""Must kill you,fast and easy."She came toward me,licking her fangs.

                                                                                                                                                      

1 comment:

  1. I like the build up to what I think may be a fight scene!
    Mrs.Goins

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