The Four Elements: Swimming with the fishes

Jay shot through the course, diving under the water. Swimming was always his strongest sport, even though he had just discovered his force of nature. It seemed so...natural to him. he shot down like a bullet and came back up, no dripping water. On the side, he shot a jet of water toward a fire, extinguishing it. Then he finished the course. Jay thought that it was too easy. ( It seems like a really short course, but Jay was already nearly finished by the time we came around to tell the chapter.) " How did you do?" said Blake, with his flaming red hair. " Fine." said Jay, but in the start, he had made a big mistake: He ran through the wrong course first. Then Oliver yelled for him to go back to the Water course. ( That's why we kind of came late to the chapter.) Once he had finished, he saw Oliver shaking his head. Jay was probably behind most of the Elements. He saw Ariel take the course next. He thought that her name just sounded plain weird. Why not Air-EE-l? That was plain dumb, he thought when they had introduced everyone. Blake and Jay walked off. He wondered how everyone else had done.