November 30th,1925
Dear diary,
Today,I was carrying a bundle of blankets down the basement stairs when suddenly I heard a sound coming from behind the walls of the basement.I quickly set the bundle down and ran up to get the box of Christmas lights.As I carried them down I saw a door that had NOT been there before.I heard the rattle of chains and a ghostly hand went through the door,I screamed for my father.Moments later he was in the basement looking at the door.He said that nobody would go down to the basement until he called the police.The police came and said that we should call a haunting investigator.They are coming tomorrow to investagate the door.
Goodnight diary.
Wednesday, March 26, 2014
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I really like it! The diary entry puts some emotion and feeling into the story. The feelings also incorporate some horror and tension. It's really cool!
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