Wednesday, April 9, 2014

Death Of Dad Book 1 Pompeii Chapter 1 The

Chapter One The Text.

One day I was walking in the woods. Then I got a text from my dad and it said"I'm in Pompeii and the volcano is exploding! Show your mother this text and this is my last conversation with you. By." I put "By dad ." When I got home I showed my mom the text and she burst into tears. After that I went to work.


                                
  <-This is what happened in Pompeii


                                                

                                                                          

1 comment:

  1. |: Uh, no offense... but Mt. Vesevius exploded way before technology and bound books were invented... Went to work? What? This doesn't make too much sense.

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