Doug's heart stopped mid-beat. He was about to die.
"Well, well, well, look who we have here. Did you really think you could escape? Your luck, I'm in a good mood today, but mark my words Ferguson, you won't live past Punishment Day. Listen up, if you try to escape again, you won't make it to Punishment Day. Oh yeah, we figured out that Jason was part of your plan and, how do I put this...........the officer that arrested Jason, wasn't as forgiving as me.............HA HA HA! " laughed Buzzard.
"What did you DO TO HIM!?!?!" Doug questioned.
"Nothing much, just execution........that shouldn't be that bad, I mean, he attempted escape!" Buzzard exclaimed.
"WHAT THE HECK IS WRONG WITH YOU!!!" yelled Doug. Doug broke off into a sprint towards the execution room. Thoughts raced through his head as he ran forward still in disbelief. He turned a corner and saw the door to the execution room. He powered through to the door and threw it open. Jason was tied to a chair with the executioner with a gun pointed at Jason. Doug arrived just in time to see the executioner pull the trigger.
Wednesday, October 23, 2013
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OMG! THAT IS SO GOOD! That is an awesome cliffhanger!
ReplyDelete~Sanjna
The ending made me cry and I can't believe Jason died!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDelete-Gavin 'sniff sniff'
I love the suspense you build during your story. You really know how to get us hooked into your characters and care about them so that when something happens we are surprised!
ReplyDeleteI love the work you did! You could become a writer if you keep up!!!
ReplyDeletePeople would love your work!!! ;) <3