Wednesday, December 4, 2013

Mashup

   There was a very beautiful young teenager named Addeline.Everyone called her Addy. She had fairly long golden-brown hair, which she always tied up in a nice round bun, but eventually it fell down near the end of the day. She didn't wear anything fancy. She wore nice clean cotton dresses with a twist belt. She lived in barn house and her backyard was yellow-brown grass and a barn...shed. She doesn't mind her house, she just loves the outdoors and her backyard is basically muck. Although her backyard isn't much, she still loves to go outside and lay in the grass. One day she discoved that there were new people moving in just about half a mile away from her own house. There was a young teenager who lived there aswell, and her name is Daniella and everyone calls her Elle. Addy realized that Elle had a beautiful garden with a bridge and a pond in her backyard, so one day she went exploring.
   Once in Elle's backyard Addy was in her dreamland. There were flowers, frogs, and many dragonflies. Just then she heard a rustle,she ducked down. Elle came and asked what she was doing. She got up and said, "Sorry, I was just exploring."
   "That's okay, let's go look around," Elle said.
   Addy gets up and they go exploring. There's many oak trees with lots of branches. There's even a small cottage with a little bedromm and a place to hang out.
   "Oh I would do anything to have this backyard," Addy says.
   "I don't really like the outdoors," Elle replies.
   "I love the outdoors," Addy gets up and starts running aroud, "I would do anything to live here and have this backyard."
   "Well the outdoors isn't my favorite thing," Elle says.
   Then they hear someone yell, "Elle, time to come in!!!!"
   "That's my mom, I have to go now," Elle getts up slowly.
   "Well, I'll see you tomorrow right, we can go in your cottage," Addy says geting up also.
   "Yeah totally, bye," Elle says.
   Addy says, "Bye," Slowly walking through the garden and taking in everything just once again.

3 comments:

  1. very detailed for example:"she had fairly long golden hair" - Celina

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  2. My name is actually Elle!!!

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