One day the Hegans family was going to the beach. They got all their supplies ready for the beach and put it in the trunk. When they finally arrived to the beach, they took down there supplies and put it in a plastic bag. When they finally set down their things, the little girl (Stephany) went to go play in the water. Then the teenage girl (Rachel) was going to a restroom. When she was walking to the restroom someone grabbed her. She didn't know who it was. The mysterious person was walking her to a car.The person put her in the car and started driving, she saw a lot of dirty buildings while the person was driving. There was trash everywhere she looked. When they finally came to a stop a man said get out of the car.
To be continued...
Wednesday, February 5, 2014
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Mathew and Dennis, Nice. Wait- you can to a To Be Continued at the end. That's all. Nothing more to say. Go write another. -Sara
ReplyDeleteI hope this has a happy ending :) Mrs.Goins
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