Rachel called all the girls over. "What is it," asked one of the girls. "I don't know, but it will probably get us out of here," Exclaimed Rachel. The girls didn't hesitate to go into the dark tunnel. It was to dark to see so the girls felt along the wall "Where do you think this tunnel will go?" asked Sydney "I don't know" exclaimed Hannah. They walked until a faint disgusting smell filled the air. They paused for a second and then kept walking. The farther they walked the more the smell came clear. Then there was a faint light. The farther they walked the brighter the light was. Then suddenly it was bright. Then the girls realized that the tunnel led to a sewer. The smell was more disgusting then a skunk. The lights were dim but they could see the way. The sewer finally came to an end and there was a ladder. They started climbing up the ladder. the ladder came to an end and there was a man hole. Then they opened it.
To be continued...
Wednesday, February 19, 2014
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Awesome! probably my favourite story on the blog!
ReplyDelete~Elle
please write more!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDelete-sophia